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12．學(xué)生都喜歡課間十分鐘，但應(yīng)如何利用課間十分鐘呢？有些高中學(xué)生課間依舊在教室認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)（如圖1），也有些高中學(xué)生走出教室積極活動(dòng)（如圖2）．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面兩幅圖片用英文寫一篇短文．你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片（30詞左右）；
2．談?wù)勀銓?duì)這種現(xiàn)象的感想；
3．你更喜歡哪一種方式？簡(jiǎn)述理由（至少兩點(diǎn)）．

注意：
1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)150個(gè)左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱
As is vividly shown in the pictures．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，從圖畫中看出反映的問題，寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：As is vividly shown in the pictures，many students are buried in their lessons while others are playing happily outside．如圖所示，許多學(xué)生被埋在他們的課上，而其他的學(xué)生在外面玩得很開心．本句中As is vividly shown in the pictures，是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，as是關(guān)系代詞翻譯成"正如"；主句中while表對(duì)比，一些學(xué)生埋頭課堂和玩得開心的學(xué)生的對(duì)比．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：Some students want to make use of that period of time having a good time with their classmates．有些學(xué)生想利用那段時(shí)間和同學(xué)們玩得開心．本句中用了現(xiàn)在分詞having在句中做狀語．

解答 As is vividly shown in the pictures，many students are buried in their lessons while others are playing happily outside．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）Nowadays，school breaks can be either"physical"or"academic"，which is a very interesting phenomenon．【反應(yīng)的現(xiàn)象】
I think students in class are usually looking forward to the break．However，they are expecting different things．Some students want to make use of that period of time having a good time with their classmates．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）They enjoy fun by chatting，playing games，or doing some outdoor activities．I don't deny some students are really hardworking，absorbing knowledge every minute．They want to spend the break reading，doing homework，or reviewing lessons．【學(xué)生的不同觀點(diǎn)】
    As a high school student，I am in favor of the"physical"way of break．On one hand，I find I feel very relaxed when I play outside．Refreshing myself is necessary，which can make me energetic for my next class； on the other hand，doing exercise can build my body and make me stronger．Besides，All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy，so we should struggle for a balance between study and play．【跟人觀點(diǎn)】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 看圖作文是以圖畫或圖表來提供目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等場(chǎng)景，要求作者借助圖畫，通過聯(lián)想將一組畫面的直觀內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神達(dá)意的文字形式，用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內(nèi)容，從寫作體裁上看，可說明介紹，可敘事記人，可寫景狀物，也可以發(fā)表議論．看圖作文主要考查學(xué)生的觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)造能力和語言表達(dá)能力．