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7．健康之重要人盡皆知．許多青少年不注重健康問題，假期尤甚．長時間看電視，通宵上網(wǎng)聊天、玩游戲．導(dǎo)致的危害如：影響視力，身體虛弱，缺乏人際交往． 簡述你的看法，提出你的建議．
詞數(shù)120左右，標(biāo)題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Have a healthy lifestyle
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Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life．
只有當(dāng)我們健康我們可以好好學(xué)習(xí)，享受生活．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out，which may have a bad effect on their mental health．
三、他們將失去機會與他人面對面為他們從不去溝通，這可能對他們的心理健康有不良影響．

解答 Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know，health is very important．Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life（高分句型一）．
However，many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health，especially during the holiday．And they spend too much time watching TV，playing games and chatting on the Internet all night，which is bad for their health．First，this may make them get near-sighted．Besides，their bodies become much weaker．Thirdly，they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out，which may have a bad effect on their mental health（高分句型二）．
In my opinion，they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer．Go out to take some exercises，play some sports and visit some and have a healthy lifestyle．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．