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13．假如你叫李華，今年寒假馬上來臨，某公司要招聘臨時翻譯，你向該公司交一份申請書，謀求這個職位．可從個人英語水平、類似工作學習經歷、與人交往能力等方面進行闡述．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的抬頭和落款已給出，但不計入總詞數．
Dear Sir or Madam，
Dear Sir or Madam，
In an advertisement I know that your company is in need of a temporary interpreter．I would like to apply for the job．（寫信目的）
Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．（高分句型一）I took great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．（高分句型二）Thanks to my fluent spoken English，I'll be equal to the job．I once participated in an English speaking contest and finished first place and that proved my perfect oral English and enhanced my confidence．（高分句型三）（個人英語水平及工作經歷）Besides，I'm outgoing and like communicating with others，and as a result，I make friends with people from all walks of life．I can keep a calm mind even facing strangers，which may assure me to be a qualified interpreter．（高分句型四） （交際能力）
In a word，I'm full self-confident that I can get the position and do it well．（高分句型五）（衷心希望）
Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．
Yours faithfully
Li Hua

Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 假如你叫李華，上個月剛剛高中畢業(yè)，某公司要招聘臨時翻譯，你向該公司遞交一份申請書，謀求這個職位．可從個人英語水平、類似工作學習經歷、與人交往能力等方面進行闡述．這是一篇提綱類作文，需要考生用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．寫作時可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，應注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．
【亮點說明】文章簡潔明了，把需要表達的要點清晰的表達了出來，并且做了適當的擴展，其間也運用了一些連接詞和高級的句型．Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．我已經學習英語十年了，很好的完成這件事．現在分詞作狀語．great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．我在很小的年紀就對英語產生了很大的興趣，這對我的英語水平有很大的好處．這一句采用了非限制性定語從句來表達．最后一句Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．感謝你的考慮，期待你盡快的回復．以表期望，這種求職信中經常會用到．文章中還有一些短語用得恰到好處，比如in need of急需；Thanks to因為，后面只能接名詞不能接句子；In a word總之等等．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
     In an advertisement I know that your company is in need of a temporary interpreter．I would like to apply for the job．（寫信目的）
     Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．（高分句型一）I took great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．（高分句型二）Thanks to my fluent spoken English，I'll be equal to the job．I once participated in an English speaking contest and finished first place and that proved my perfect oral English and enhanced my confidence．（高分句型三）（個人英語水平及工作經歷）Besides，I'm outgoing and like communicating with others，and as a result，I make friends with people from all walks of life．I can keep a calm mind even facing strangers，which may assure me to be a qualified interpreter．（高分句型四） （交際能力）
      In a word，I'm full self-confident that I can get the position and do it well．（高分句型五）（衷心希望）
      Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．
                                                                                                                                                            Yours faithfully
                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．