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4．昨天，我參加了一個(gè)會(huì)議，其間，兩個(gè)學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一個(gè)關(guān)于因特網(wǎng)的優(yōu)勢(shì)和弱點(diǎn)的辯論．
他們表達(dá)了各種各樣的關(guān)于因特網(wǎng)的觀點(diǎn)，這是我以前從沒有想到過的．例如，一些專家認(rèn)為，花費(fèi)大量時(shí)間在因特網(wǎng)上的結(jié)果（outcome）是在形成社會(huì)紐帶（bonds）方面的困難．他們毫不諱言這樣一個(gè)事實(shí)，因特網(wǎng)使用者花費(fèi)了更多的時(shí)間與他們的因特網(wǎng)朋友在一起，遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)多于與他們的來(lái)自工作和學(xué)校的真實(shí)生活中的朋友在一起．這是一個(gè)警醒（alarm  sb）我們的因特網(wǎng)的不幸的方面．
他們還表述了一些因特網(wǎng)的好的方面．使我映象深刻的是，在因特網(wǎng)的幫助下，最新的信息只是一次在鍵盤上的敲擊就可以發(fā)送出去（a click away）．通過使用因特網(wǎng)，我們還可以和遠(yuǎn)方的人們?cè)诟鱾�(gè)領(lǐng)域保持一致，這對(duì)于不能長(zhǎng)時(shí)間離開家的殘疾的人們來(lái)說(shuō)尤其重要．
雙方呈現(xiàn)了大量的數(shù)據(jù)來(lái)支持他們的觀點(diǎn)．我自己的判斷是因特網(wǎng)在整體上是有益的．因特網(wǎng)只是我們工作、生活中的工具，是人們本身，而不是因特網(wǎng)真正重要（count）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Yesterday I went to a conference，where two students had a debate about the strength and weakness of the Internet
高分句型二：
What impressed me most is that up-to-date information is only a click away with the help of the Internet．
句型一 where two students had a debate about the strength and weakness of the Internet 該句是一個(gè)由where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，where在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，先行詞為conference表地點(diǎn)
句型二 What impressed me most is that up-to-date information..該句是一個(gè)由what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，what在從句中作主語(yǔ)，注意：當(dāng)從句作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)用單數(shù)

解答 Yesterday I went to a conference，where two students had a debate about the strength and weakness of the Internet．（提出論點(diǎn)）（高分句型一）
     They made diverse points about the Internet that I had never thought about before．For example，some experts think that the outcome of spending too much time on the Internet is the difficulty in forming social bonds．They were also quite explicit about the fact how serious Internet users spend more time with their Internet friends than with their real-life friends from school and work．This is an unfortunate aspect of the Internet that alarms us．（反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)）
     They also addressed good points of the Internet，as well．What impressed me most is that up-to-date information is only a click away with the help of the Internet．（高分句型二）By using the Internet，we can also correspond with people in distant places，which is very important for disabled people who cannot always leave their homes．（贊同觀點(diǎn)）
     Both sides presented lots of statistics to support their arguments．My own judgment is that the Internet is beneficial on the whole．The Internet is only a tool in our work and life．It is not the Internet but people themselves that really count．（客觀對(duì)待因特網(wǎng)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書面表達(dá)為讀寫任務(wù)型作文，該篇作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言將作文展示出來(lái)．