Question

14．人們對待機遇有不同的態(tài)度，請以"Opportunities favour the prepared mind"為題，按要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章，要點如下：

對待機遇的態(tài)度	結果	你的觀點
夢想著成功，卻遲遲沒有行動，等著天上掉餡餅	只能看著機遇從身邊悄悄溜走	（請舉例說明）
默默努力著，為機遇的到來做好充分準備	最終迎來成功的喜悅

注意：
1．可參照以上內容適當發(fā)揮；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱．
Opportunities favour the prepared mind
There are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright future．One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future，but without any action，while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared．
The message conveyed above is crystal clear：Opportunities favour the prepared mind．The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats opportunities．Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities．Unsuccessful people，on the other hand，work little and just wait，seeing them pass by．
To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities，let's take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example．In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics，she trained hard day after day and eventually made it．Therefore，we should make efforts to make our dreams come true．It's universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts．（152）．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future，but without any action，while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared
一個是夢想有前途的機會，一個沒有行動，另一個則全身心地投入工作，準備充分．
高分句型二：
To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities，let's take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example．
為了進一步突出我們的態(tài)度對待機會的重要性，讓我們以中國跳水運動員吳敏霞為例，．

解答 One possible version：
Opportunities favour the prepared mind
There are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright future．One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future，but without any action，while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared（高分句型一）．
The message conveyed above is crystal clear：Opportunities favour the prepared mind．The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats opportunities．Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities．Unsuccessful people，on the other hand，work little and just wait，seeing them pass by．
To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities，let's take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example（高分句型二）．In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics，she trained hard day after day and eventually made it．Therefore，we should make efforts to make our dreams come true．It's universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts．（152）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．