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16．根據(jù)要求完成大作文
同學(xué)們，中考過后，你們即將告別親愛的母校．回首三年的母校生活，學(xué)校里的很多規(guī)則有助于你的健康成長(zhǎng)．你能告訴我們?cè)谀銈儗W(xué)校有哪些規(guī)則嗎？你對(duì)這些校規(guī)有何看法？你對(duì)母校有哪些合理化建議？請(qǐng)你以My School Rules 為題，寫一篇短文．
  要求：1．語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語意通順、連貫；
2．書寫工整、規(guī)范；
3．根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和真實(shí)地名；
5．詞數(shù)：70詞左右．文章的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
My School Rules
In our school，we have many rules．We shouldn't be late for school．We have to wear school uniforms to school every day．We can't run or shout in the hallways．We can't eat in class．We should listen to the teachers carefully in class．We aren't allowed to smoke in school．
I think our school rules are too strict．We should be allowed to choose our own clothes．That will make us more comfortable．We shouldn't have too much homework to do every day．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文字?jǐn)?shù)要求為70詞．寫作主題為：My School Rules．寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，你能告訴我們?cè)谀銈儗W(xué)校有哪些規(guī)則嗎？，你對(duì)這些校規(guī)有何看法？3，你對(duì)母校有哪些合理化建議？

解答 My School Rules
In our school，we have many rules．We shouldn't be late for school．We have to wear school uniforms to school every day．We can't run or shout in the hallways．We can't eat in class．We should listen to the teachers carefully in class．We aren't allowed to smoke in school．
I think our school rules are too strict．We should be allowed to choose our own clothes．That will make us more comfortable．We shouldn't have too much homework to do every day．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 作文：
1．單詞錯(cuò)誤三處扣1分；
2．語法錯(cuò)誤兩處扣1分；
3．小作文只要符合語境、語言規(guī)律，均可得分．
大作文分四檔：
1．一檔作文：13-15分，書寫工整、規(guī)范，內(nèi)容豐富，語言流暢，條理清晰，無語法錯(cuò)誤、單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤或錯(cuò)誤極少；
2．二檔作文：10-12分，書寫比較工整，內(nèi)容比較豐富，語言流暢，條理清晰，有少量語法及單詞錯(cuò)誤；
3．三檔作文：6-9分，書寫不夠工整，內(nèi)容不夠豐富，語言不夠流暢，條理不夠清晰，有部分語法及單詞錯(cuò)誤；
4．四檔作文：0-5分，字跡潦草，內(nèi)容不豐富，語言不流暢，條理不清晰，有很多語法及單詞錯(cuò)誤．
注：主觀試題屬開放性試題，答 題只要符合題意及語言規(guī)律均可酌情給分．