Question

15．最近你班就高三學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該組織集體春游進行了討論．以下是討論的情況．請你用英語寫一篇短文，反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，然后發(fā)表在你校英語論壇上．贊成（62%）的理由反對（38%）的理由1．親近大自然，拓寬視野；2．增強溝通、合作能力；3．結(jié)交新朋友．1．占用寶貴的學(xué)習(xí)時間；
安全很難保證．
注意：詞數(shù)120左右（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）．
參考詞匯：春游spring outing    視野horizon
Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．
                                                  

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于是否應(yīng)該組織集體春游話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明話題；二贊成和反對的理由；三自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．句子里going on a group spring outing 是動名詞做主語；not only…but also 連接并列的主語，表示"不但…而且"．
以他們看來，集體春游不僅能夠讓他們貼近大自然，開拓眼界，而且有助于提高交流和合作能力．
2．As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．句子里benefit  from 表示"從…獲益"；only if 引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，表示"只要"．
依我看來，只要采取合理的安全措施，我們就能從活動中獲益良多．

解答 Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．They take different attitudes towards it．（點明話題）
       62% of the students say yes．In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．【高分句型一】Furthermore，it gives more opportunities to make new friends．However，38% of the students hold the opposite opinion．They think that they are supposed to concentrate their energies on studying，because the university entrance examinations are around the corner．The outing is a waste of time．Meanwhile，they can't prepare for every emergency．（贊成和反對的理由）
        As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．【高分句型二】On the whole，I am in favour of the former．（自己的看法）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
在確定了主題，人稱，時態(tài)以后，我們要根據(jù)要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇．在這一過程中要注意選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)谋硎静⒘�、遞進、因果或轉(zhuǎn)折意義的過渡詞，把所有要點、句子連接起來，使句與句意思連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)銜接，力求準(zhǔn)確生動、條理清楚．