Question

20．最近一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明，將近有50%的學(xué)生不吃早餐，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章．
內(nèi)容包括：1．不吃早餐的害處及原因
2..你的建議
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右 （開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文內(nèi)容充實(shí)連貫．
A study shows that nearly 50% percent of the students don't have breakfast．
They tend to feel sleepy in class and have bad memories，so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of test．（高分句型）
Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them．In addition，a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast．
In fact，the morning meal plays an important part．It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）So school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇傳統(tǒng)作文，中文提示即文章的主要內(nèi)容，考生切入容易，內(nèi)容貼近考生生活，考試有話(huà)可說(shuō)，可以有感而發(fā)．具有一定的生活性．要求學(xué)生根據(jù)中文提示，分析不吃早餐的原因，后果和根據(jù)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象提出一定的建議，考試要在表達(dá)的時(shí)候適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)詞匯，句型和各種連接詞，使文章連貫，自然，句型多樣化，有利于分?jǐn)?shù)檔次的提高．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：tend to 傾向于；In addition另外； In fact事實(shí)上
It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）句中使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）句中使用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句

解答 A study shows that nearly 50% percent of the students don't have breakfast．They tend to feel sleepy in class and have bad memories，so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of test．（高分句型）   
    Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them．In addition，a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast．
    In fact，the morning meal plays an important part．It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）So school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀(guān)性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．