Question

10．假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參加學(xué)校組織的"英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)師生座談會(huì)"，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)提出建議．

自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況	1．英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的目的
	2．英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法
	3．課外自學(xué)的途徑
	…．
對(duì)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的建議	（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點(diǎn)建議）．

注意：
（1）對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
（2）詞數(shù)150左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
（3）Dear teacher and schoolmates，It's a great pleasure for me to be today and share my
experience of learning English with you．I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future．Naturally it's very important for me to learn English well．As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building．I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible．After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio．Besides，I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources．
Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school．Firstly，we should be given more opportunities to use what we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it．Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them．Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals．
Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本文為應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給表格的內(nèi)容提示寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：介紹自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)提出建議．既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一、三人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：share sth with sb （與某人分享…），be interested in（對(duì)…..感興趣），learned a lot from…．（從…．學(xué)到很多），have a better grasp of …（更好地掌握…），recommend sth （推薦…），put sth to use（把某物投入使用），whenever possible…（無(wú)論何時(shí)可能的情況下…），make some suggestions on…..（提出關(guān)于…的建議）．

解答 Dear teacher and schoolmates，
It's a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you．I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future．（1．英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的目的）Naturally it's very important for me to learn English well．As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building．【高分句型】I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible．（2．英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法）After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio．Besides，I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources．（3．課外自學(xué)的途徑）（自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況）
      Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school．Firstly，we should be given more opportunities to use what we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it．【高分句型】Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them．Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals．【高分句型】（對(duì)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的建議）
       Thank you for listening．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 表格類作文寫(xiě)作要注意：1）不同文體的格式，避免"填表式"表達(dá).2）靈活變通，避免"硬譯式"，表達(dá)表格中的漢語(yǔ)提示簡(jiǎn)潔凝練，概括性強(qiáng)，表達(dá)時(shí)切忌逐字逐句翻譯，要做靈活調(diào)整或進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充；較為抽象、復(fù)雜的漢語(yǔ)提示應(yīng)善于變通轉(zhuǎn)換．3）銜接，避免"單句式"表達(dá)，使全文語(yǔ)篇通順連貫．