Question

【題目】如圖所示，一群高中學(xué)生正在操場(chǎng)撿拾垃圾，旁邊有部分學(xué)生在踢球玩耍，對(duì)撿垃圾者熟視無(wú)睹。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)對(duì)這幅照片的理解用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的短文。短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：

1. 簡(jiǎn)要描述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作，等等；

2. 目前校園內(nèi)環(huán)保狀況；

3. 你自己的感想和建議。

注意：

1. 可參照?qǐng)D片及下面文章開(kāi)頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。

2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

As is vividly shown in the picture,

Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly shown in the picture, some volunteers are bending down and picking up rubbish, with plastic bags in their hands and sweat on their foreheads. Nearby are some boys playing football, totally ignoring what other students are doing.

While focusing on their studies, some students do not pay enough attention to their behavior at school, and littering is the most common. That’s not appropriate behavior for us high school students. It not only dirties the environment, but also does great harm to the image of the school.

As a matter of fact, a clean environment can never be emphasized too much. It beautifies our school, making it a good place to study in. We should develop good habits of protecting the environment. Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin. Let’s keep in mind that a better environment means a better life.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文，根據(jù)提示信息和圖表說(shuō)明來(lái)介紹具體情況。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照方位順序進(jìn)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如倒裝句和賓語(yǔ)從句穿插：Nearby are some boys playing football, totally ignoring what other students are doing；It beautifies our school, making it a good place to study in.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)；還有讓步狀語(yǔ)從句：Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)bend down，pick up, focus on , pay attention to，do great harm to，develop good habits of，keep in mind等。插入語(yǔ)As a matter of fact，以及連詞not…but… 的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。