Question

15．假定你是李華，昨天你不慎將從Tom那兒借來的包弄壞了，為此請用英語給他寫一封道歉信．主要內(nèi)容如下：
1．表達歉意；
2．簡述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過；
3．提出補救措施．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
 2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
 3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I'm writing this letter to tell youwhat has happened to the bag I borrowed from you yesterday．
When I got home after school，I put the bag on the sofa and began to do my homework．Unfortunately，when I wanted to put something into it，I found my father's pet dog had torn it into several pieces．I'm so sorry for this．When my father knew it，we went to the store and bought a new one for you．I will take the new bag to school tomorrow．I hope you won't be angry and can accept it．I also hope I can still borrow some things from you when I need them．
Apologize to you again for this and hope we can be friends forever．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封道歉信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，用一般過去時態(tài)簡述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，一般將來時提出補救措施．內(nèi)容包括：一表明書信目的；二簡述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過并且提出補救措施；三再次表達歉意并提出希望．
高分句型：
1．I'm writing this letter to tell you what has happened to the bag I borrowed from you yesterday．句子里what引導(dǎo)賓語從句 has happened to the bag I borrowed from you yesterday； I borrowed from you yesterday是定語從句，修飾先行詞the bag．
我寫信來告訴你，昨天我從你那里借來的包發(fā)生了一些事．
2．Unfortunately，when I wanted to put something into it，I found my father's pet dog had torn it into several pieces句子里．Unfortunately表示"不幸的是"，修飾整個句子；賓語從句my father's pet dog had torn it into several pieces發(fā)生在I found 之前，所以用的是過去完成時態(tài)．
不幸的是，當我想要往里面放東西的時候，發(fā)現(xiàn)我爸爸的寵物狗把包撕碎了．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Tom，
      I'm writing this letter to tell you what has happened to the bag I borrowed from you yesterday．【高分句型一】（表明書信目的）
      When I got home after school，I put the bag on the sofa and began to do my homework．Unfortunately，when I wanted to put something into it，I found my father's pet dog had torn it into several pieces．【高分句型二】I'm so sorry for this．When my father knew it，we went to the store and bought a new one for you．I will take the new bag to school tomorrow．I hope you won't be angry and can accept it．I also hope I can still borrow some things from you when I need them．（簡述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過并且提出補救措施）
     Apologize to you again for this and hope we can be friends forever．（再次表達歉意并提出希望）
                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作步驟：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點，避免填表式或履歷表式表達．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．