Question

17．The other day，BBC broadcast its documentary（紀錄片）"Are Our Kids Tough Enough？-Chinese School"，in which the British and Chinese teaching styles competed against each other，with both sides tested after four weeks to see who comes out on top．
In this unique experiment，five Chinese teachers took over a British classroom with 50teenagers aged 13and 14in a British school for one month and taught them in a typical Chinese way：no talking，no questions and experiencing the severe classroom discipline within an extended school-hour from 7a．m．to 7p．m．In the meantime，another group of students were guided in the British teaching style：free talking，free questioning，thinking for themselves and relaxing learning atmosphere．
At the end of the documentary，all the pupils took part in the same exams in a few subjects．Next is the result．

	Mathematics	Chinese	Science
Chinese style	67.74	46.88	58.33
British style	54.84	36.46	50

Faced with the result，many netizens in Britain made a strong suggestion to their Education Minister that Britain should learn from China and adopt China's educational style．
【寫作內容】
假設英國教育部長正在向中國學生征詢對上述建議的看法，請你給他寫封信表達你的看法．
1．用約30個單詞完成上文的概要．
2．用約120個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點，你應該
（1）闡述你對"英國教育該不該采用中國方式"的看法；
（2）用2～3個理由或論據支撐你的觀點．
【寫作要求】
1．寫作時不能直接引用原文語句．
2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱．
【評分標準】
內容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數適當．
Dear Minister，
I hear that many people in your country are suggesting Britain's education system should follow China's after a BBC documentary，which reported a 4-week experiment ending up with Chinese teaching methods defeating British ones．．It is said you are collecting opinions from Chinese students．The following is my view．
Personally，I strongly advise you forget Chinese style of education．On one hand，Chinese students wining in test scores is in fact at the cost of their creative abilities and autonomy in learning．As a matter of fact，many of my classmates could do nothing without teachers'and parents'help，let alone make great innovations in their later life．On the other hand，Chinese students are suffering from a severe lack of sleep and good health，all due to the pursuit of a high score in numerous tests．Without a healthy body，nothing is meaningful．Do you really want young Britons to spend 15 to 16 hours a day on study？
Therefore，dear Minister，you should think twice if you decide to follow that suggestion．
Your sincerely，
A Chinese senior student．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
I hear that many people in your country are suggesting Britain's education system should follow China's after a BBC documentary，which reported a 4-week experiment ending up with Chinese teaching methods defeating British ones
我聽說你們國家很多人都認為英國的教育制度應遵循中國的英國廣播公司的紀錄片后，報道一項為期4周的實驗結束了與語文教學方法打敗英國人．
高分句型二：
On the other hand，Chinese students are suffering from a severe lack of sleep and good health，all due to the pursuit of a high score in numerous tests．
另一方面，中國學生都患上了嚴重的睡眠和健康的缺乏，由于對許多考試高分的追求．

解答 Dear Minister，
I hear that many people in your country are suggesting Britain's education system should follow China's after a BBC documentary，which reported a 4-week experiment ending up with Chinese teaching methods defeating British ones（高分句型一）．It is said you are collecting opinions from Chinese students．The following is my view．
    Personally，I strongly advise you forget Chinese style of education．On one hand，Chinese students wining in test scores is in fact at the cost of their creative abilities and autonomy in learning．As a matter of fact，many of my classmates could do nothing without teachers'and parents'help，let alone make great innovations in their later life．On the other hand，Chinese students are suffering from a severe lack of sleep and good health，all due to the pursuit of a high score in numerous tests（高分句型二）．Without a healthy body，nothing is meaningful．Do you really want young Britons to spend 15 to 16 hours a day on study？
    Therefore，dear Minister，you should think twice if you decide to follow that suggestion．
Yours sincerely，
A Chinese Senior Student

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．