Question

17．假設(shè)你是李華．你的好友Jack患感冒并發(fā)燒，在家復(fù)習(xí)迎考．請你寫封信給他，詢問病情并告訴他英語復(fù)習(xí)的建議及考試的時間．考試時間：5月6日上午8：00-10：00．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．短文的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jack，
     ．
Yours truly，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
In order to make us get well prepared for the exam，our English teacher has given us some useful suggestions．
為了讓我們?yōu)榭荚囎龊脺?zhǔn)備，我們的英語老師給了我們一些有用的建議．
高分句型二：
Firstly，you'd better master the key words，phrases and sentence patterns that we have learned this term．
首先，你最好掌握關(guān)鍵的詞，短語和句型我們這學(xué)期學(xué)的．

解答 Dear Jack，
Sorry for your illness．Are you feeling any better now？
It's a pity that you can't go over your lessons with us．The English final exam will be held from 8：00-10：00 on May 6th．In order to make us get well prepared for the exam，our English teacher has given us some useful suggestions（高分句型一）．I think you can go over your English lessons as follows（如下）．Firstly，you'd better master the key words，phrases and sentence patterns that we have learned this term（高分句型二）．Secondly，it is a good idea to go over class notes and daily exercises．Besides，we are supposed to practise writing and reading English every day．Hope you will recover soon and also get a satisfactory mark in the exam．
Yours truly，
LiHua．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．