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8．假定你是李華，就讀于光明學(xué)校高一，請你用英文寫一封信給你父母，介紹你在學(xué)校這半年來英語學(xué)習(xí)上的情況．要點(diǎn)如下：
從驚訝、擔(dān)憂、進(jìn)步及對未來的信心四個(gè)方面談?dòng)⒄Z學(xué)習(xí)的情況．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；  2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭語已為你寫好；4．不可透露自己學(xué)校的班級、你的真實(shí)姓名及你的老師的姓名；
Dear parents，
I have been studying in Grade One of Guang Ming Middle School for nearly half a year．
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

Answer 1

分析 這是一個(gè)提綱類作文，根據(jù)題目要求人稱用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)（過去英語學(xué)習(xí)上的問題），一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)（現(xiàn)在英語學(xué)習(xí)上的進(jìn)步）和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)（對未來的信心）．內(nèi)容分成四部分：一引出主題；二 過去英語學(xué)習(xí)上的問題；三英語學(xué)習(xí)上的進(jìn)步；四對未來的信心．
高分句型：
1．My English teacher's language ability （主語）also puts （謂語）what I have acquired in shade（賓語從句）．put…in shade表示"給…投入陰影，使懷疑"
我英文老師的語言能力也讓我對于自己會(huì)的東西產(chǎn)生懷疑．
2．Anyway（無論如何），I am convinced（相信） that（引導(dǎo)賓語從句） I will improve my English proficiency（精通），though（一定讓步狀語從句） I still have a long way to go．
無論如何，我相信我將會(huì)是自己精通英語，盡管我仍舊有很長的路要走．

解答 One Possible Version
Dear parents，
I have been studying in Grade One of Guang Ming Middle School for nearly half a year．This half year has seen my surprises，worries，and progress in English learning．（引出主題）
First，I was shocked to find myself surrounded by much better English learners when I started my English course．My English teacher's language ability also puts what I have acquired in shade．【高分句型一】Sometimes I even can't follow my English teacher's lectures．Secondly，my spoken English always embarrasses myself．I regret for what I ignored before．Thirdly，my vocabulary is still my concern．A larger vocabulary is required to follow the teacher in class for the way of teaching and learning is quite different here．I was upset when I saw my poor score of the test for Unit Two．（過去英語學(xué)習(xí)上的問題）Faced with all the difficulties，I was determined to fight．With the help of my teacher and my classmates，I have made progress．Now I can roughly understand what the teacher teaches in class despite a fewer problems．（英語學(xué)習(xí)上的進(jìn)步）
Anyway，I am convinced that I will improve my English proficiency，though I still have a long way to go．【高分句型二】There is always light at the end of the tunnel，I strongly believe．（對未來的信心） 
                                                                                                                 Yours
                                                                                                                    Lihua

點(diǎn)評 雖然這是一個(gè)提綱類作文，但是給的東西很少，所以很多東西需要自己發(fā)揮．這就需要學(xué)生自己有關(guān)于這一話題的語言．因此平時(shí)要多讀多看各種文字，從而使自己不至于沒話說．