Question

10．假設你是紅星中學的李津，你的美國朋友Mike遨請你今年暑假去他家度假，請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一封回信．
1、接受邀請并表達感謝；
2、詢問那邊的情況（內容自擬至少兩點＞：
3、約定接機時間：7月8日上午9點，航班號CA983
4、表達想見到他的強烈愿望．
（注意：短文不少于100詞）
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
（接受邀請并表達感謝） I am highly honored to accept your invitation for the summer vacation and thank you in advance．I will treasure this wonderful chance，（高分句型一）which will help me learn more about American culture and life．
Now I am making some necessary preparations for it．However，（詢問情況） could you be so knid as to tell me something about the climate there and what clothes are needed？Besides my flight will arrive at 9 a．m．on July 8．（高分句型二）I would appreciate it if you can pick me up at the airport．I cannot wait to see you again．
I am looking forward to your early reply．（表達想見面的愿望）．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一） I will treasure this wonderful chance，which will help me learn more about American culture and life．
該句使用了which引導一個非限制性定語從句，which指代先行詞chance．
（高分句型二）I  would appreciate it if you can pick me up at the airport．I cannot wait to see you again．
該句使用了一個固定句型，即  I would appreciate it if you…如果你能做…我太感激了．
高級詞匯：be highly honored to do非常榮幸做；treasue珍惜；make preparations for 為…做準備；
Besides此外；

解答 Dear Mike，
      How is everything going？
    （接受邀請并表達感謝）  I am highly honored to accept your invitation for the summer vacation and thank you in advance．I will treasure this wonderful chance，（高分句型一）which will help me learn more about American culture and life．
     Now I  am making some necessary preparations for it．However，（詢問情況） could you be so knid as to tell me something about the climate there and what clothes are needed？Besides my flight will arrive at 9 a．m．on July 8．（高分句型二）I would appreciate it if you can pick me up at the airport．I cannot wait to see you again．
     I am looking forward to your early reply．（表達想見面的愿望）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．