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20．隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來(lái)越多的人們喜歡走出家門去領(lǐng)略祖國(guó)的秀麗風(fēng)光，請(qǐng)你以 The advantages of Travel 為題，談?wù)劼眯械暮锰�，�?nèi)容包括：
1．旅行可以開(kāi)拓眼界，增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)．
2．旅行可以幫助人們結(jié)識(shí)更多的朋友．
3．旅行可以提高人們解決問(wèn)題的能力．
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右； 2．適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來(lái)越多的人們喜歡走出家門去領(lǐng)略祖國(guó)的秀麗風(fēng)光，以 The advantages of Travel 為題，談?wù)劼眯械暮锰�，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：旅行可以開(kāi)拓眼界，增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)；旅行可以幫助人們結(jié)識(shí)更多的朋友；旅行可以提高人們解決問(wèn)題的能力． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As the Chinese saying goes正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō)；As far as I am concerned就我而言；not only…but also 不僅…而且；Besides另外；deal with 處理；
As the Chinese saying goes，"It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books．"（高分句型一）
As far as I am concerned，traveling can not only make ourselves relaxed but also broaden our mind and enrich our knowledge．（高分句型二）
Secondly，when traveling，we may meet some people who share the same interest and hobbies with us，and we may develop a lasting friendship．（高分句型三）

解答 The Advantages of Traveling
     As the Chinese saying goes，"It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books．"（高分句型一）
     As far as I am concerned，traveling can not only make ourselves relaxed but also broaden our mind and enrich our knowledge．（高分句型二）When we are traveling，we will be lost in the beautiful scenery and forget our stress and worries． Secondly，when traveling，we may meet some people who share the same interest and hobbies with us，and we may develop a lasting friendship．（高分句型三）Besides，he who travels far knows more．Traveling can provide us chances to deal with problems，thus we can gain more knowledge and improve our ability．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．