Question

9．假如你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友Tom即將外出旅行，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封電子
郵件，向他介紹你對(duì)旅游的看法并提醒他旅行注意事項(xiàng)．
1．旅游是一種非常好的活動(dòng)．
2．旅行前的準(zhǔn)備：了解天氣，帶好衣服…
3．旅行時(shí)注意飲食衛(wèi)生和安全，防止小偷．
要求：1．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，不得逐句翻譯；
2．詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you are going to travel．Now I'd like to share my view on travelling with you．
                                   
Yours，LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本題是提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作，根據(jù)材料提示寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，向John介紹你對(duì)旅游的看法并提示他旅行注意事項(xiàng)，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1、旅游是一種非常好的活動(dòng)．當(dāng)你累了或有空的時(shí)候，到外地走走．欣賞美 景，呼吸新鮮空氣，交朋友，放松身心，有益健康．2、旅行前的準(zhǔn)備．了解天氣，帶好衣服、相機(jī)、常用藥品等．3、旅行時(shí)注意飲食衛(wèi)生和安全，防止小偷．寫(xiě)作時(shí)以第一人稱(chēng)為主，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主要時(shí)態(tài)．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：share…with…（與…分享）；In my opinion（以我看來(lái)，我的觀點(diǎn)是）； get tired of （厭煩，厭倦）；make friends with （與…交朋友）；ahead of time（提前）；and so on（等等）； pay attention to （注意）
高分句型：1．Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build up your health．
副詞only置于句首時(shí)，句子用倒裝，故情態(tài)動(dòng)詞will位于主語(yǔ)you之前．
2．①Be careful with everything everywhere②in case your money gets stolen．
①此處用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型提出建議，增強(qiáng)了表達(dá)效果．②引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句，意為以防免得．

解答 Dear John，
    I'm glad to hear that you are going to travel． Now I'd like to share my view on travelling with you．
    In my opinion，travelling is a very good activity． When you get tired of your work or study and when you have free time，you can go out to enjoy the beauty of nature．You can breathe the fresh air，meet different people and make friends with them． Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build up your health（高分句型一）．
    In order to have a pleasant journey，you need to make full preparations ahead of time．You'd better have clear information about the weather，and bring proper clothes，a camera，some medicine for common injuries and diseases and so on．On your journey，you must pay attention to what you eat．Be careful with everything everywhere in case your money gets stolen（高分句型二）．
    Do you agree with me？Wish you a good journey．                                                         
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．