Question

11．假設你是某中學英文報Talks with Jamie專欄的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信．信中該名高中生訴說了自己的困擾：近日學習壓力大，作業(yè)多，不得不熬夜．請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英文給該學生回信并提供建議．
內(nèi)容要點：
1．表示理解并給予安慰；
2．指出經(jīng)常熬夜的危害；
3．給出你的建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．開頭與格式已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Hi，Worried，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．                                   
Jamie．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封回信．寫作要點包括：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．指出經(jīng)常熬夜的危害；3．給出你的建議．寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重點詞匯：at the moment（目前，現(xiàn)在）；in fact（事實上）；as we all know（眾所周知）；do harm to （對…有害）；the next day（第二天）；ensure（保證，確保）；take a nap （睡午覺）
高分句型：1．In fact，the problem ①you are facing is common among senior high school students，②so you don't have to worry much．
                 ①you are facing 是一個定語從句，修飾主語the problem；②so引導結(jié)果狀語從句．
                 2．Moreover，if we stay up too late，we will feel too tired and sleepy to study efficiently the next day．
                 if引導條件狀語從句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時，主句用一般將來時．
                 3．First of all，it's important to improve your study efficiency．
                句中it作形式主語，真正的主語是不定式短語to improve your study efficiency．

解答 Hi，Worried，
I'm so sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．In fact，the problem you are facing is common among senior high school students，so you don't have to worry much（高分句型一）．
As we all know，lack of sleep does harm to our health．Moreover，if we stay up too late，we will feel too tired and sleepy to study efficiently the next day（高分句型二）．Therefore，we must ensure a good night's sleep．But how can you make it？Here are a few suggestions．
First of all，it's important to improve your study efficiency（高分句型三）．In this way，you can save a lot of time．Besides，why not take a nap after lunch？It helps you feel refreshed and energetic the whole afternoon．
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful．
                                                                Jamie

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意要點的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．