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9．近期，上海某中學(xué)高一學(xué)生進(jìn)行了關(guān)于街頭藝人的討論．討論的題目是"街頭藝人是否要持證上街表演"．請你根據(jù)下表中的提示寫一篇英語短文，介紹討論的情況．

一些同學(xué)的觀點	另一些同學(xué)的觀點
街頭藝人應(yīng)該經(jīng)過一定的考核程序持證表演，那么他們的表演會更專業(yè)更安心． 假冒藝人減少，社會秩序也會更穩(wěn)定…	街頭藝人為了生存而表演，沒有必要持證． 群眾需要各種藝人來豐富業(yè)余生活，不應(yīng)該對他們進(jìn)行限制…
你的觀點：…

注意：1．短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．詞數(shù)120詞左右．
參考詞匯：程序procedure   穩(wěn)定的stable  假冒者pretender
Recently，a class in Shanghai has held a discussion about whether street artists should perform with a license on the street．The opinions are different．Recently，a class in Shanghai has held a discussion about whether street artists should perform with a license on the street．The opinions are different．
Some students think it quite necessary to obtain a performing license after a series of procedures．With a license，more professional street artists will show off their talents at ease without worrying about being driven away．（高分句型）Besides，the number of pretenders will naturally be reduced so that the social order will tend to be stable．
On the other hand，others hold the opposite view．In their opinion，most street artists perform just to support themselves，so it is unreasonable to be too strict with them．（高分句型） If the government limits them too much，they can't have access to an ordinary life easily．In addition，our life is greatly enriched by the different performances of street artists．
As for me，I am in favor of the regulated performance，as people nowadays have a higher level in appreciation of arts．（高分句型）．

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分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息討論"街頭藝人是否要持證上街表演"．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從街頭藝人應(yīng)該經(jīng)過一定的考核程序持證表演，那么他們的表演會更專業(yè)更安心．假冒藝人減少，社會秩序也會更穩(wěn)定…和街頭藝人為了生存而表演，沒有必要持證．群眾需要各種藝人來豐富業(yè)余生活，不應(yīng)該對他們進(jìn)行限制…兩個方面來討論該話題并發(fā)表自己的觀點 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：performing license表演許可證；show off炫耀，展示；Besides另外；On the other hand另一方面；be strict with對…嚴(yán)格；In addition另外；be in favor of 支持

解答 Recently，a class in Shanghai has held a discussion about whether street artists should perform with a license on the street．The opinions are different．
Some students think it quite necessary to obtain a performing license after a series of procedures．With a license，more professional street artists will show off their talents at ease without worrying about being driven away．（高分句型）Besides，the number of pretenders will naturally be reduced so that the social order will tend to be stable．（一些同學(xué)的觀點）
    On the other hand，others hold the opposite view．In their opinion，most street artists perform just to support themselves，so it is unreasonable to be too strict with them．（高分句型） If the government limits them too much，they can't have access to an ordinary life easily．In addition，our life is greatly enriched by the different performances of street artists．（另一些同學(xué)的觀點）
   As for me，I am in favor of the regulated performance，as people nowadays have a higher level in appreciation of arts．（高分句型）（作者觀點）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．