1.增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下面畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
=2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.
Traveling enables us to enjoy not only the beauty of nature but different cultures.Beside,it can also broaden our views and makes us feel relaxed.However,something unexpected may be happen!For example,the weather can be so changeable you can't carry out your plan,or you may get hurting during the trip.In order for avoid bad luck,you should do all the necessary preparations before traveling.It is quite necessarily to find a traveling companion so that you can look after each other.It's important of you to bring a cellphone.You can prepare well before the trip,happiness and safe will keep you company all the way.Traveling is pleasant activity.
分析 本文作者主要介紹了旅游的好處以及為了能有一個愉快而又安全的旅行/避免在旅行中碰到一些麻煩,提出了一些建議.
解答 Traveling enables us to enjoy not only the beauty of nature but
different cultures.Beside,it can also broaden our views and
makes us feel relaxed.However,something unexpected may
be happen!For example,the weather can be so changeable∧you
can't carry out your plan,or you may get hurting during the trip.
In order for avoid bad luck,you should do all the necessary preparations
before traveling.It is quite necessarily to find a traveling companion so
that you can look after each other.It's important of you to bring a cellphone.
You can prepare well before the trip,happiness and safe will keep you
company all the way.Traveling is∧pleasant activity.
詳解:
1.Beside改為Besides 考查副詞 介詞beside意為"在…旁邊";besides用作介詞時,意為"除…外",作副詞時,意為"此外、而且";此處用來修飾后面的句子,意為:此外,故用副詞Besides
2.makes改為make 考查動詞的形式 此處與and之前的can also broaden一起在句中作并列謂語,因此這里應省略掉情態(tài)動詞can,故用make.
3.去掉may之后的be 考查情態(tài)動詞 此處用在情態(tài)動詞may之后,表達的是主動意義,所以要使用動詞原形,故去掉may之后的be.
4.changeable后加that 考查固定搭配 so…that…意為:如此…以至于…;此處指的是:天氣是如此地變化無常,以至于你都不能實行你的計劃;故在changeable后加that.
5.hurting改為hurt 考查固定短語 get hurt意為:受傷;故用hurt.
6.for改為to 考查固定短語 in order to 意為:為了做某事,其后跟動詞原形;in order for:為了…,其后跟名詞;由于此處之后為動詞avoid;故用to.
7.necessarily改為necessary 考查固定句型結(jié)構(gòu) it is it is+形容詞+(for/of sb.) to do sth.意為:某人做某事是…的;故用形容詞necessary.
8.of改為for 考查介詞 由于在 it is+形容詞+(for/of sb.) to do sth.結(jié)構(gòu)中,用介詞of重點說明某人怎樣;用for重點說明對某人來說做某事怎樣;本句的意思是:帶手機對你來說很重要;故用for.
9.safe改為safety 考查名詞 此處與and之前的名詞happiness一起在句中作并列主語,故用名詞safety.
10.pleasant前加a 考查不定冠詞 此處用來修飾單數(shù)名詞activity,表示泛指一項令人愉快的活動;故在pleasant前加不定冠詞a.
點評 短文改錯是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題,主要考查學生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力.錯誤類型一般有:缺詞、多詞和錯詞.常見的錯誤有:1 詞法錯誤,主要包括動詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此類試題時,需要正確分析句子成分,熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常見句法錯誤.通常表現(xiàn)為簡單句、復合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強調(diào)句等錯誤.解答此類試題時,需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法.3 應在理解文章大意的前提下,進行作答.