分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假設你是李華,與朋友Bob約好要在星期日一起去游泳,但是因故不能赴約.請你給他寫封信,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點包括:對不能赴約表示歉意;說明不能赴約的原因(原因自擬);另約時間及碰頭地點去游泳.(時間及碰頭地點自擬)
2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:To tell the truth實話說;keep my promise遵守承諾;Due to由于;is familiar with 對…熟悉;Therefore因此;As for 至于;ahead of 提前;
To tell the truth,it's really exciting to go swimming with you on Sunday afternoon but I'm afraid that I can't keep my promise.(高分句型一)
Due to the fact that she is not familiar with my hometown,I have to meet her at the train station in the afternoon.(高分句型二)
If it's OK for you,please let me know ahead of time or you can suggest another time.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Bob,
To tell the truth,it's really exciting to go swimming with you on Sunday afternoon but I'm afraid that I can't keep my promise.(高分句型一)Now I'm writing to apologize to you for what I will do.
I have just received a phone call from my cousin saying that she will come to visit me this Sunday.Due to the fact that she is not familiar with my hometown,I have to meet her at the train station in the afternoon.(高分句型二)Therefore,I can't spare time to go swimming with you.As for this.I'm terribly sorry and I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
I wonder if you are free next Sunday afternoon.If so,we can go early so that we'll have time to see a film together after swimming.We can meet at the school gate at 2 o'clock.If it's OK for you,please let me know ahead of time or you can suggest another time.(高分句型三)
Yours,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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