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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It was fine and the sky was clear blue. I wanted to go somewhere excited with my roommates. Finally we decided to climb to the Great Wall. It took us one and a half hour to get there by bus. Upon arriving, we begin to climb happily, sharing stories about the Wall. After two hours of climbing, we reached the top, where we enjoyed the breathtaking scenery or took quite a few photos. See the Great wall wind its way over the mountains, both of us felt really amazed. How a wonder! As the famous saying goes, “He who has never been to the Great Wall not a true man.” I felt like I was the true man.

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【解析】

本文為記敘文。文章講述了我和我的室友們一起去爬上長城的事情。

1．考查形容詞。excited（興奮的）主要表達(dá)人對事物的感受，此處作后置定語修飾somewhere，表示事物本身所具有的性質(zhì)或特征，應(yīng)該用形容詞exciting。故將excited改為exciting。

2．考查介詞。climb是及物動詞，后面直接帶賓語，介詞to是多余的。故去掉to。

3．考查名詞的數(shù)。one and a half 修飾復(fù)數(shù)名詞，故將hour改為hours。

4．考查動詞的時態(tài)。本文整體時態(tài)為過去式，講述過去發(fā)生的事，此處英語整體時態(tài)一致。故將begin改為began。

5．"我們欣賞了令人嘆為觀止的景色"與"拍了不少照片"之間為并列關(guān)系而不是選擇關(guān)系．故將or改為and。

6．考查非謂語動詞。See the Great wall wind its way over the mountains這一部分在句子中作狀語，且動詞see與主語之間為主動關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在分詞．故將See改為Seeing。

7．考查代詞。both是"兩者都"，從前面看I和my roommates應(yīng)該指三人以上，用代詞all。故將both改為all．

8．考查感嘆句。how通常修飾形容詞或副詞，a wonder是名詞，修飾名詞應(yīng)該用what．故將How改為What。

9．考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)。本句中he作主語，who has never been to the Great Wall 作定語修飾代詞he，缺少謂語動詞，故在not前加is。

10．考查冠詞。定冠詞the表特指，此處true man是泛指概念，應(yīng)用不定冠詞a。故將the改為a。