6．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）畫(huà)掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
         2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Our government is built a"harmonious society（和諧社會(huì)）"．It is our duty to work hard to achieve this goals．First of all，we should love our motherland，caring about the development of our hometowns and take an active part our school's activities．Secondly，we should respect the old and love the young，included our parents and teachers．We should also unite the student around us and help each other．Above all，we must be honestly and reliable in our daily life．Last but not least，we should try our best to saving energy and protect against our natural environment．Let's start right now and spares no effort to do a little bit every day!

分析 作者在本文講述了怎樣去建立一個(gè)和諧社會(huì)．首先要熱愛(ài)祖國(guó)，關(guān)系家鄉(xiāng)的發(fā)展；其次要尊老愛(ài)幼，團(tuán)結(jié)同學(xué)；第三要誠(chéng)實(shí)守信；最后還有節(jié)約能源，保護(hù)環(huán)境．

解答 Our government is built a"harmonious society（和諧社會(huì)）"．It is our duty to work hard to achieve this goals．First of all，we should love our motherland，caring about the development of our hometowns and take an active part∧our school's activities．Secondly，we should respect the old and love the young，included our parents and teachers．We should also unite the student around us and help each other．Above all，we must be honestly and reliable in our daily life．Last but not least，we should try our best to saving energy and protect against our natural environment．Let's start right now and spares no effort to do a little bit every day!
詳解：
1．built改為building；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，用building與is構(gòu)成現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，句意為"我們的國(guó)家正在建設(shè)一個(gè)和諧社會(huì)"．
2．goals改為goal；考查名詞，前面有this修飾，名詞要用單數(shù)形式．
3．caring改為care；考查動(dòng)詞，這里care與前面的love和后面的take是并列成分，形式要保持一致．
4．part后面加in；考查固定搭配，take part in 是固定短語(yǔ)，意為‘參加'．
5．included改為including；考查形近詞辨析，included用作形容詞，用在名詞或代詞后，意思是"包括在內(nèi)"． including用作介詞，意思是"包括在內(nèi)"，根據(jù)句意可知此處要用including．
6．student改為students；考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，根據(jù)句意"我們應(yīng)該團(tuán)結(jié)周?chē)耐瑢W(xué)"可知要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
7．honestly改為honest；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞作be的表語(yǔ)，構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
8．saving改為save；考查動(dòng)詞，不定式to后面要跟動(dòng)詞原形，try one's best to do 意為"盡某人最大的努力做某事"．
9．去掉against；考查介詞，此處句意為"保護(hù)我們的自然環(huán)境"，protect是及物動(dòng)詞，可以直接加賓語(yǔ)，protect against意為"保護(hù)…使免受…"．
10．spares改為spare；考查并列結(jié)構(gòu)，此處spare與start是并列成分，用于Let's之后，要用動(dòng)詞原形．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先快速閱讀短文，了解短文基本大意，確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)，再運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法，詞匯，習(xí)慣性短語(yǔ)等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)進(jìn)一步分析各個(gè)句子，找出文中的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．

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