Question

假定你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“健康成長(zhǎng)”的英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)按要求寫(xiě)一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1 樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度

2 努力學(xué)習(xí)

3 參加體育鍛煉

關(guān)鍵詞：態(tài)度 attitude 樂(lè)觀的 positive

                                                                                   

                                                                                      

                                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.We should be brove in front of difficulties.secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running ,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【解析】

試題分析：本文較為簡(jiǎn)單，是關(guān)于健康成長(zhǎng)的短文，要點(diǎn)很簡(jiǎn)單，留給考生發(fā)揮的余地較大，考生可以根據(jù)自己的個(gè)人感受做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，要使用合適的連接詞firstly, secondly來(lái)連接全文。也要使用高級(jí)的詞匯如consist of等提高文章的文采。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開(kāi)放性作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的話題較為簡(jiǎn)單，要求也不高�？忌梢詮男睦砗蜕淼慕】蛋l(fā)展兩個(gè)方面著手，培養(yǎng)樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度，參加體育鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用多種句型讓文章充滿變化，提升文章的層次。