Question

當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英文短文：

1.看電影的好處

2.讀原著的好處

3.我的看法及理由

注意：1.詞數(shù)100～120，文章題目和開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）

2.參考詞匯：(the) original work 或(the) book in the original（原著）

重要要求：

1.注意書法，書法分4分；

2.句式要求：文中要有一句話使用從句、倒裝或者強調(diào)句；有一句話使用非謂語。每句話3分，共計6分，請考生在自己作文中的這兩句話下面下劃線，如果全文無下劃線的句子，則以0分記入作文總分；

3.作文內(nèi)容分：15分。

Film or book, which do you prefer

Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Film or book, which do you prefer?

Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.

Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.

Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。內(nèi)容要求寫議論文1.看電影的好處；2.讀原著的好處；3.我的看法及理由。句式要求：文中要有一句話使用從句、倒裝或者強調(diào)句；有一句話使用非謂語。寫作前應該看清題目的要求，分析時態(tài)和人稱。同時還應該注意高級詞匯的運用和句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文中結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次清楚。使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，應用了表語從句、賓語從句和不定式作主語和表語。 并注意了句子的銜接如：Besides，Personally，What’s more 等等。

考點：提綱作文。