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18．假設(shè)你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的主席李華．你校學(xué)生會(huì)打算組織一次有機(jī)蔬菜采摘活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一份通知．內(nèi)容包括：
1．活動(dòng)目的：了解有機(jī)蔬菜的種植；體驗(yàn)采摘樂(lè)趣；
2．活動(dòng)時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)：本周日上午，西星農(nóng)場(chǎng)；
3．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：導(dǎo)游帶領(lǐng)參觀農(nóng)場(chǎng)；采摘蔬菜（黃瓜，西紅柿，茄子等）；在農(nóng)場(chǎng)提供的廚房親自烹飪自己摘到的蔬菜．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：采摘：pick    有機(jī)農(nóng)業(yè)：organic farming
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息用英語(yǔ)寫一份通知，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：活動(dòng)目的：了解有機(jī)蔬菜的種植；體驗(yàn)采摘樂(lè)趣；活動(dòng)時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)：本周日上午，西星農(nóng)場(chǎng)；活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：導(dǎo)游帶領(lǐng)參觀農(nóng)場(chǎng)；采摘蔬菜（黃瓜，西紅柿，茄子等）；在農(nóng)場(chǎng)提供的廚房親自烹飪自己摘到的蔬菜． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
To let us experience the joy of picking vegetables in person and learn more about organic vegetables，we are going to hold an Organic Vegetable Picking this Sunday morning on Xixing Farm．（高分句型一）句中To let us experience the joy of picking vegetables in person and learn more about organic vegetables屬于不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)
First of all，there will be a guided tour of the farm to show us how to plant organic vegetables．（高分句型二）句中First of all意思是"首先"，句中使用了there be句型
The most exciting part is that we will cook the vegetables we pick．（高分句型三）句中that為表語(yǔ)從句

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     To let us experience the joy of picking vegetables in person and learn more about organic vegetables，we are going to hold an Organic Vegetable Picking this Sunday morning on Xixing Farm．（高分句型一）
      First of all，there will be a guided tour of the farm to show us how to plant organic vegetables．Then we will pick organic vegetables like cucumbers．First of all，there will be a guided tour of the farm to show us how to plant organic vegetables．（高分句型二）Then we will pick organic vegetables like cucumbers，tomatoes and eggplants．The most exciting part is that we will cook the vegetables we pick．（高分句型三）What an interesting experience it will be!
       Come and join us!Everybody is welcome!
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點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．