Question

3．根據(jù)下面的提示，以"My healthy lifestyle"為題寫一篇英語短文．
提示：
1．早睡早起，睡眠充足；晚上不熬夜（Don't stay up late at night）；
2．良好的飲食習(xí)慣；不喝酒，不抽煙；
3．和朋友相處融洽；
4．樂于助人．
要求：1．開頭部分已寫好，你只需接著寫．
2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上提示，語句通順，合乎邏輯．
3．詞數(shù)：100個左右．
My healthy lifestyle
I am the strongest of all the students in my class because I exercise every day．                  ．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：I hardly ever eat junk food because my mother tells me that it's not good for my health．我很少吃垃圾食品，因?yàn)槲覌寢尭嬖V我這對我的健康不好．本句中because引導(dǎo)的是原因狀語從句，這個原因狀語從句中that從句做tell的賓語．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：Thinking more of others makes me become popular among students．多思考別人使我在學(xué)生中變得受歡迎．本句中運(yùn)用了動名詞Thinking在句中做主語．

解答 One possible version：
   I am the strongest of all the students in my class because I exercise every day．I get up early in the morning and go to bed before 10 o'clock every night．I never stay up late at night．Enough sleep and exercise help me stay healthy．It's very important to eat a balanced diet．I think I have a good eating habit．I try to eat less meat and more vegetables and fruit every day．I hardly ever eat junk food because my mother tells me that it's not good for my health．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）I have never touched cigarette and alcohol．At school，I get on well with my classmates and friends．I often help them with study if they need me．Thinking more of others makes me become popular among students．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）So you see，my healthy lifestyle makes my life healthy and colorful．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．