Question

9．假如你是English Corner 欄目的編輯李華，有個叫李明的學(xué)生向你請教如何學(xué)好英語．下面請你就如何學(xué)好英語以書面的形式給他提出幾條建議．
1．每天早上朗讀英語單詞、句子及短文，盡量多記一些有用的句子并背誦一些短文章；
2．經(jīng)常進行大量的課外閱讀；
3．每天應(yīng)安排一些時間進行聽力訓(xùn)練；
4．只要你能充分利用業(yè)余時間來學(xué)習英語，你的英語很快會得到提高．
注意：1．不逐條翻譯，詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Li Ming，
I'm an editor of English Corner．I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．
                ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Moreover，it is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school．
該句型使用了It is+過去分詞+that…是一個主語從句，據(jù)建議…另外suggest做建議從句使用虛擬語氣，即should do．
（高分句型二） As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English，surely，you will make rapid progress．
as long as意思是只要，引導(dǎo) 一個條件狀語從句，主語時態(tài)為一般將來時，從句一般現(xiàn)在時．
Just as the saying goes，（高分句型三）"Where there is a will，there is a way．"
該句引用了諺語"有志者事竟成"，增強了語言感染力．
高級詞匯短語：suggest 建議；memorize記憶；a great variety of 各種各樣的；make good use of 充分利用；
連接過渡詞使用：First of all首先；Meanwhile與此同時；Moreover而且；Last but not least最后但同樣重要；

解答 Dear Li Ming，
       I'm an editor of English Corner．I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．Here are some of my suggestions．
  （建議一）First of all，I suggest you read the English words，sentences and short articles aloud every morning．（建議二）Meanwhile，you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well．（高分句型一）Moreover，（建議三）it is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school．（建議四）Last but not least，a certain amount of time should be spent on listening． （高分句型二） As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English，surely，you will make rapid progress．Just as the saying goes，（高分句型三）"Where there is a will，there is a way．"If you stick to your dream and study hard，I'm sure you will be successful in your English study．（表達自己對Li Ming的信心）
      All the best．
                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 提綱作文實際上是對考生的思路以及文章的寫作范圍給出了明確的限定，因此考生在寫作時，應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點齊全的同時進行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮；要根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；注意句子的時態(tài)，詞語的豐富和句型的多樣性．