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4．I often dream of being a teacher．I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls．I teach them，play with them，watch them growing up．I am always young when I was staying with them．I know there is not easy to be a teacher．Without enough knowledges，you can never teach good．Besides，you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him．Though I am a student now，but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true．

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分析 作者在本文中陳述了自己的理想--成為一名老師．作者認(rèn)為要想成為一名老師，不僅要有充分的文化知識(shí)，還得把學(xué)生當(dāng)作朋友，照顧好學(xué)生．

解答 I often dream of being a teacher．I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls．I teach them，play with them，w∧atch them growing up．I am always young when I was staying with them．I know there is not easy to be a teacher．Without enough knowledges，you can never teach good．Besides，you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him．Though I am a student now，but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true．
詳解：
1．in改為on；考查介詞，stand on the platform是固定搭配，意為"站在教室的講臺(tái)上面"．
2．give改為giving；考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，此處giving和前面的standing是并列成分，用在介詞of之后，故形式要保持一致，用動(dòng)名詞形式．
3．watch前面加and；考查并列成分，多個(gè)成分并列時(shí)，最后兩個(gè)并列內(nèi)容之間加and．
4．was改為am；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)上下文時(shí)態(tài)可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
5．there改為it；考查固定句式，此處用it作賓語(yǔ)從句中的形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)為不定式短語(yǔ)to be a teacher．
6．knowledges改為knowledge；考查名詞，knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有單復(fù)數(shù)變化．
7．good改為well；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語(yǔ)修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞teach，good是形容詞，其副詞形式是well．
8．him改為them；考查人稱代詞，此處代詞指代的是前文的復(fù)數(shù)名詞pupils，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
9．去掉but；考查連詞，though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句時(shí)不能與but連用，故去掉but．
10．comes改為come；考查省to不定式，此處make為使役動(dòng)詞，后面接不帶to的動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題首先要整體理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，結(jié)合語(yǔ)境和上下文關(guān)系，充分運(yùn)用平時(shí)掌握的固定搭配，習(xí)慣用法，句型結(jié)構(gòu)等等來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)文章的錯(cuò)誤之處，加以修正．