Question

【題目】下面兩幅圖反映的是部分城鄉(xiāng)孩子所面臨的窘境。請就此圖談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ�你的文章�?yīng)包括：

● 具體描述兩幅圖；

● 簡要分析造成這兩種現(xiàn)象的原因；

● 提出解決問題的建議。

（注：請勿出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校）

Answer 1

【答案】

The common thing in these two pictures is that both of the kids are having heavy burdens on the back and that they have suffered enough of their states. However, the difference lies in the situation that the city boy is overwhelmed by a big bag of books，while the back of the peasant boy is bended downward by a heavy bundle of rice straw. Apparently, though at the same age, they face clearly varied fates.

Students in cities grow numb with studies because their life is flooded with piles of test papers and routines of shuttling back and forth in various effective cram schools. Inversely, children in rural areas don’t have access to education. On one hand, educational facilities are long kept inadequate due to the underdeveloped transportation and to the shortage of qualified teachers, who are likely to prefer city life. On the other hand, their parents usually don’t value their being educated but urge them to drop out, for household farm work is scarcely linked to what the children are taught in schools.

To break this embarrassing situation, the government, playing the very core role, should help relieve the heavy studies burden on city students, and meanwhile offer enough subsided welfare in order to encourage more teachers to support the rural education cause. Besides, parents serve an important part in this problem. Those in cities shouldn’t push their children so hard in their academic performance 4while those in countryside should attach more importance to their kids’ school studies so that their children can keep track of the changing society. 8All in all, the government, educators and parents should get united to work out this problem.

【解析】

試題分析：本文為漫畫作文。文章主要反映了城鄉(xiāng)孩子面臨的困境�？忌�首先要描述這兩幅圖，然后再分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因，最后要提出解決方法。漫畫類作文開頭一定要用來描述圖片信息，語言要客觀，不要那么快夾帶自己的看法，就如同一般議論文那樣開頭要客觀闡述現(xiàn)象一樣。在寫作時，要正確使用連接詞，使文章通順連貫。還要使用亮點詞匯以及優(yōu)秀句式，為文章增色。

【亮點說明】表語從句：首段用了兩個表語從句的并列，記得第二個that是不能省的。短語：suffer enough of their states，受夠了他們所處的現(xiàn)狀。被動語態(tài)結(jié)構(gòu)：用兩種表述方式sb be overwhelmed by 和one’s back be bended downward by表述孩子身肩重負(fù)，表達多樣化。連詞：while表示前后鮮明對比。短語：be flooded with，生動說明城市學(xué)生每天的生活都被一系列的壓力充斥著；并且生動描述了現(xiàn)在城市學(xué)生的生活究竟是被什么內(nèi)容占據(jù)——寫不完的試卷，穿梭在讀不完的補習(xí)班里。邏輯連接詞：有效闡述情況的不同方面�，F(xiàn)在分詞非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)：現(xiàn)在分詞可以當(dāng)作定語從句來用，表達更顯高級。邏輯連接詞：避開Therefore／To sum up等常見結(jié)尾詞，使得表達更顯特色。