Question

假如你是李華，紅星中學的學生。2013年11月8日菲利賓遭受臺風“海燕”襲擊，你們班組織了一次募捐活動，幫助受災地區(qū)的孩子重返校園。請你根據(jù)以下表格中的提示，向?qū)W校英文�？�投稿，介紹這次活動情況。

提示詞：flea market 跳蚤市場

注意： 1. 文章開頭已為你寫好；

2. 添加適當?shù)男畔�，使文章流暢�?/p>

3. 詞數(shù)不少于60。

內(nèi)   容
災情	數(shù)以萬計人民死亡，日常生活遭受嚴重的破壞，很多孩子失去家庭和學校
活動	組織班會，談?wù)撝г�辦法
捐獻零用錢；組織跳蚤市場吸引學校跟多人募捐；獲得1萬5千元
愿望	菲利賓人民早日戰(zhàn)勝災難；孩子早日返校

As you know, Super typhoon Haiyan hit the eastern seaboard of the Philippines on November 8th, 2013…….

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Answer 1

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As you know, Super typhoon Haiyan hit the eastern seaboard of the Philippines on November 8th, 2013. It caused great damages to people’s life. Millions of people were killed and thousands of children lost their families and schools.

On hearing the news, we all felt sorry for them. In order to show our pity, we held a class meeting last Monday to discuss how to help the people, especially the homeless children, in the disaster-stricken areas. At last, we came up with a great idea and a flea market was held in the school yard to appeal students to sell their old things and raise money. Many students took part in it and 1,500 Yuan was contributed. We did hope what we had done could express our great concerns, and it was also our wish that the victims could beat the storms earlier and the children could return to school soon

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達，這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些比較常見的短語In order to 為了，At last最后， came up with想起 appeal sb to do呼吁某人做某事，took part in參加。On hearing the news, we all felt sorry for them這個句子中on 表示一。。就 。In order to show our pity, we held a class meeting last Monday to discuss how to help the people, especially the homeless children, in the disaster-stricken areas.這個句子中in order to do 表目的狀語，especially尤其。We did hope what we had done could express our great concerns這個句子中did用來表強調(diào)動詞hope, what we had done引導主語從句。it was also our wish that the victims could beat the storms earlier 在這個句子中that引導wish 的同位語從句。

考點： 提綱類作文