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18．假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校要舉辦首屆英語(yǔ)節(jié)（English Festival）．請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義用英語(yǔ)給全校師生寫一封信．信的內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．活動(dòng)時(shí)間：9月26日-9月27日；
2．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：如英文歌曲比賽、英文戲劇表演、西方文化講座等；
3．活動(dòng)意義．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
I have exciting news to share with you．The first English Festival is to be held from September 26th to 27th．This festival promises to be a feast for ears and eyes as well as minds．（高分句型一）Students and teachers alike are welcome to participate in English singing competitions，drama performances，or attend lectures on Western culture．（高分句型二）
By immersing everyone in the charm of English，the festival is bound to fuel your desire to be better English learners，spark your way of thinking and above all get all of you to have fun with English．（高分句型三）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校要舉辦首屆英語(yǔ)節(jié)（English Festival）．請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義用英語(yǔ)給全校師生寫一封信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)時(shí)間：9月26日-9月27日；活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：如英文歌曲比賽、英文戲劇表演、西方文化講座等；活動(dòng)意義．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：as well as 也；participate in參加；be bound to一定；above all最重要的是；have fun 過(guò)得愉快；
This festival promises to be a feast for ears and eyes as well as minds．（高分句型一）
Students and teachers alike are welcome to participate in English singing competitions，drama performances，or attend lectures on Western culture．（高分句型二）
 By immersing everyone in the charm of English，the festival is bound to fuel your desire to be better English learners，spark your way of thinking and above all get all of you to have fun with English．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear teachers and schoolmates，
      I have exciting news to share with you．The first English Festival is to be held from September 26th to 27th．This festival promises to be a feast for ears and eyes as well as minds．（高分句型一）Students and teachers alike are welcome to participate in English singing competitions，drama performances，or attend lectures on Western culture．（高分句型二）
      By immersing everyone in the charm of English，the festival is bound to fuel your desire to be better English learners，spark your way of thinking and above all get all of you to have fun with English．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．