Question

8．在中國(guó)，餐桌上的浪費(fèi)（waste on the dining table）一直是人們熱議的話題．據(jù)報(bào)道，每年中國(guó)餐桌上浪費(fèi)的糧食達(dá)到驚人的2000億元（200billion），被倒掉的食物相當(dāng)于2億多人一年的口糧．請(qǐng)你以餐桌上的浪費(fèi)為題，寫一篇100字左右的演講稿．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．闡述目前餐桌浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象；
2．發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)；
3．提出建議或者解決措施
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Ladies and Gentlemen，
The huge amount of waste on the dining table in China seems an urgent  problem                                        Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本題為提綱類寫作，根據(jù)提示所給材料以"餐桌上的浪費(fèi)"為題，寫一篇100字左右的演講稿．要點(diǎn)包括：1．闡述目前餐桌浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象；2．發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)；3．提出建議或者解決措施．寫作時(shí)以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主要時(shí)態(tài)．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：be up to （達(dá)到）；call on （號(hào)召，呼吁）； phenomenon（現(xiàn)象）；timely（及時(shí)地）；In addition（而且）；be supposed to （應(yīng)該）；pack up （打包）；In conclusion（總之）
高分句型：1．Every year，the waste on the dining table in China is worth up to 200 billion，①which can almost feed 200 million people under poverty line in urban and rural，②as is reported on massive media．
①which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語從句；②as這里是代詞，指代上文提到的內(nèi)容．
2．Therefore，it is high time that our government took a range of effective measures to strengthen the management of waste on the dining table．
這是句型"It is high time to do sth"，it做形式主語，不定式短語是真正的主語．
3．In conclusion，only if we make joint efforts，can this problem be gradually solved．
only是副詞，位于句首，句子用倒裝．

解答 The huge amount of waste on the dining table in China seems an urgent problem．Every year，the waste on the dining table in China is worth up to 200 billion，which can almost feed 200 million people under poverty line in urban and rural，as is reported on massive media（高分句型一）．
In my view，it is necessary to call on the public to draw special attention to this phenomenon．It can't be denied that such critical issue as waste，if not settled timely，will eventually grow into a harmful factor in the development of society．
Therefore，it is high time that our government took a range of effective measures to strengthen the management of waste on the dining table（高分句型二）．In addition，as citizens，we are supposed to raise our awareness of saving．For example，order what is enough and pack up what is left on the table if possible．
In conclusion，only if we make joint efforts，can this problem be gradually solved（高分句型三）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對(duì)，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．