分析 本文是一篇話(huà)題作文,根據(jù)所給題目"My dream of going to university",寫(xiě)一篇短文,暢想自己的大學(xué)生活.寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng),時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):1.理想大學(xué);2.理想大學(xué)專(zhuān)業(yè)及生活;3.目標(biāo)及決心.
重要短語(yǔ):
dream of(夢(mèng)想);root in(根植于);come true(實(shí)現(xiàn));take part in(參加);devote oneself to(致力于);endeavor to(努力)
高分句型:
1.This dream has been rooted in my heart for the following reasons.靈活運(yùn)用root in等短語(yǔ),達(dá)到自然過(guò)渡的效果.
2.For one thing,the school has my favorite major--law,in which I take great interest.該句為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句.
3.If my dream can come true,not only will I devote myself to my study but also I will endeavor to perfect myself by joining clubs and taking part in various activities.
該句運(yùn)用not only…,but also…句型,主將從現(xiàn),endeavor to,take part in等短語(yǔ).
解答 Ever since middle school,I have dreamed of going to Wuhan University.(點(diǎn)明主題)
This dream has been rooted in my heart for the following reasons.(高分句型1)For one thing,the school has my favorite major--law,in which I take great interest.(高分句型2)For another,it is near my hometown,so it is very convenient for me to go home if I miss my parents.If my dream can come true,not only will I devote myself to my study but also I will endeavor to perfect myself by joining clubs and taking part in various activities.(高分句型3)(夢(mèng)想及目標(biāo))
I know there is still a long way to go,but I will never give up in pursuing my dream.(做出總結(jié))
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