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17．請按下列提示，用英語寫一篇短文．
假如你是某家英文報社的編輯，昨日收到一位中學(xué)生讀者王麗的來信．請根據(jù)來信內(nèi)容和所給的要點提示用英語寫一封回信．詞數(shù)100左右．
Dear Editor，
I am a hardworking girl and want to be the number one in my class．But in the exams，I always make mistakes that I should have avoided．I really worry about it．What can I do to improve my performance in exams？
Wang Li
提示：
1．不要壓力太大；
2．如有問題，請教老師或同學(xué)；
3．考試時合理分配時間并盡量抽出幾分鐘檢查．
注意：
1．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；
2．書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：分配-distribute
Dear Wang Li，
It's good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams．
                          

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）try to learn from the errors you've made in the past exams and avoid making the same mistakes again．
該句里 you've made in the past exams 是一個定語從句，修飾先行詞errors，省略關(guān)系代詞that，
（高分句型二）while taking an exam，distribute your time properly according to the number of questions．
首先while引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句，省略you are，主從句主語一直可以省略從句主語；句意為根據(jù)問題的數(shù)量，合理分配時間；
高級詞匯：distribute分配；avoid doing避免做；review復(fù)習(xí)；so as to 為了；
在列舉的時候，使用了過渡詞，如First of all、Secondly、Thirdly、Besides、Last but not least．

解答 Dear Wang Li，
      It is good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams．Here are some of my suggestions on how to improve your performance．（提出具體建議）
      First of all，don't put too much pressure on yourself．Even a very great person can make mistakes sometimes．Secondly，（高分句型一）try to learn from the errors you've made in the past exams and avoid making the same mistakes again．Thirdly，（高分句型二）while taking an exam，distribute your time properly according to the number of questions．Besides，spare a few minutes to review your paper so as to spot the silly mistakes and correct them．Last but not least，form a good learning habit and enjoy the challenge each new exam brings．
      I hope these suggestions can be of help to you．May you succeed!

點評 這是一封回信，內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活，是學(xué)生在平時的學(xué)習(xí)生活中會遇到的情況，考生有話可說．要求學(xué)生圍繞如何提高成績，如何避免不該出現(xiàn)的錯誤提出適當(dāng)?shù)慕ㄗh，學(xué)生要緊扣主題，根據(jù)自身的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，提出切實可行的建議，運用高級詞匯，穿插連接詞和靈活運用各種句型．