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11．據(jù)報道，在我國仍有很多山區(qū)的孩子因為家庭貧窮而上不起學(xué)．你們班就如何幫助這些孩子上學(xué)進(jìn)行了討論．假如你是李華，請你把你們的建議寫成一封信寄給Teens，希望他們能夠呼吁更多的人參與這項活動．
內(nèi)容要點：
1．收集舊課本和衣服；
2．呼吁更多人幫助他們；
3．你的建議，至少一條．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Editor，
I'm a senior high school student．
            ．
Yours sincerely，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給Teens主編寫一封信，呼吁更多的人幫助山區(qū)的孩子上學(xué)，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：收集舊課本和衣服；呼吁更多人幫助他們；你的建議．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為作者寫此信的意圖．第二部分為幫助山區(qū)的孩子上學(xué)的具體建議．
重點短語與句型：
appeal to  呼吁
care for關(guān)心
As far as I'm concerned就我而言
Above all尤其，最重要的是
高分句型一：It's reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can't go to school because of poverty．此句用了it is V-ed that…"據(jù)報道"句型．
高分句型二：Above all，we should give them respect，never looking down upon them because they are poor．此句現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語

解答 Dear Editor，
    I'm a senior high school student．It's reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can't go to school because of poverty（高分句型一）．Last week，our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood．（作者寫此信的意圖）
    Here are our suggestions．First，some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them．Second，it's also very important to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children．As far as I'm concerned，we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need．Above all，we should give them respect，never looking down upon them because they are poor．（高分句型二）We'll really appreciate it if you can，through the English Weekly，increase public awareness of the poor children's living conditions and call on more people to help them．（幫助山區(qū)的孩子上學(xué)的具體建議）
                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．