3.假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(^),并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
The other day,I was invited my friend Sam's home for dinner.I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there.It was two month since we two had quarrled,so I was embarrassed and didn't know how to do.I sat down in the sofa but began to watch TV.Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill.Not until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting in purpose.I went up to Bill and greeted him warmly,smiled at him.He locked very happily and talked with me excitedly.That night,we had a great fun together.
分析 前幾天,我受邀去Sam家吃晚飯.在那我看到了Bill我有點(diǎn)意外.我們兩個(gè)月前吵過(guò)嘴.我坐到沙發(fā)上看電視,然后Sam過(guò)來(lái)讓我和Bill和好.直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到他是有意安排的.我和Bill和好了,大家玩得很開(kāi)心.
解答 The other day,I was invited∧my friend Sam's home for dinner.
加to
I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there.
surprised
It was two month since we two had quarrled,
months
so I was embarrassed and didn't know how to do.
what
I sat down in the sofa but began to watch TV.Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill.
and
Not until then∧I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting in purpose.
加did on
I went up to Bill and greeted him warmly,smiled at him.
smiling
He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly.
happy
That night,we had a great fun together.
去掉
1.加to.短語(yǔ)搭配,invite sb to sp邀請(qǐng)某人去某地.
2.surprising改為surprised.句意表達(dá)的是人的感受,要用過(guò)去分詞.現(xiàn)在分詞表達(dá)的是事物的特征.
3.month改為months.句中有two修飾,要用復(fù)數(shù)形式.
4.how改為what.題干在do是及物動(dòng)詞,要用疑問(wèn)代詞作賓語(yǔ),表示做什么.
5.but改為and.句意表達(dá)兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)作,不是轉(zhuǎn)折.
6.加did.not until位于句首,句子要部分倒裝.句意表達(dá)的是過(guò)去,要加助動(dòng)詞did.
7.in改為on.短語(yǔ)搭配,on purpose故意.
8.smiled改為smiling.題干中smile是伴隨狀語(yǔ),要用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞.smile與I構(gòu)成主動(dòng),要用現(xiàn)在分詞.
9.happily改為happy.句中happy是作系動(dòng)詞look的表語(yǔ),要用形容詞.
10.a(chǎn)去掉.fun抽象名詞,開(kāi)心.不能用a來(lái)修飾.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí).�?嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有:名詞(單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤),動(dòng)詞(時(shí)態(tài),語(yǔ)態(tài),搭配,轉(zhuǎn)換),代詞(指代錯(cuò)誤),形容詞和副詞(轉(zhuǎn)換,比較等級(jí)),連詞(and,but,or)等.偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤,如本來(lái)用her,卻用了his等等.解題是要注意:以句子為單位,以動(dòng)詞為中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤;找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主,動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分.