Question

5．假定你是高三學生王明．你的網(wǎng)友Susan給你寫信，想要了解你近期的學習和生活計劃．現(xiàn)根據(jù)如下內容給他寫一封信：
1．學好英語并提高學習成績；
2．每天抽時間進行體育鍛煉；
3．周日去看望爺爺奶奶．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Susan，
I'm glad to hear from you．You want to know my plans in recent periods．In fact，my life is very simple，but rich．The detailed plans are as follows：
First，I plan to learn English well and improve my grades．To improve my English，I will read books in English and speak more．Second，as an old saying goes，life is exercise and the first wealth is health．Thus，I am going to spend at least half an hour everyday in taking exercise to keep my health．At last，I intend to visit my grandparents every Sunday and help them do housework．
Yours sincerely，
Wang Ming．

Answer 1

分析 as an old saying goes，（高分句型一）life is exercise and the first wealth is health．
該句使用了中國一句諺語，即生命在于運動，人生最大的財富在于健康；
Thus，（高分句型二）I am going to spend at least half an hour everyday in taking exercise to keep my health．
該句使用了be going to do 將來時表示自己打算要做的事情；句子里spend+時間 in doing 花時間做某事；
銜接詞使用較流暢：First，Second，At last；
整篇文章時態(tài)運用較好，在談及自己未來計劃時，使用了一般將來時；以第一人稱口吻敘述計劃；

解答 Dear Susan，
      I'm glad to hear from you．You want to know my  plans in recent periods．In fact，my life is very simple，but rich．The detailed plans are as follows：（總說我的生活情況）
      First，（計劃一）I plan to learn English well and improve my grades．To improve my English，I will read books in English and speak more．（計劃二） Second，as an old saying goes，（高分句型一）life is exercise and the first wealth is health．Thus，（高分句型二）I am going to spend at least half an hour everyday in taking exercise to keep my health．（計劃三）At last，I intend to visit my grandparents every Sunday and help them do housework．
                                                                                                                                     Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                                      Wang Ming

點評 本次寫作為提綱類作文，考生在寫作時，要講要點概括齊全，并注意時態(tài)的選用為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時．尤其是在表達自己打算要去做的事情時，可以使用be going to do句型．