Question

19．假如你叫李華，在陸良二中讀書，在高中學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到一些問題，想得到老師的幫助，請班級的英語老師提一些建議，以幫助自己學(xué)好英語．下面表格中只給了簡單的提示，請你結(jié)合自己的實際情況給英語老師寫一封求助信，內(nèi)容如下：

學(xué)習(xí)英語時遇到的問題	1．生詞多，記憶有難度2…
請英語老師提出的建議	1．介紹一些學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法2…

字數(shù)：100左右．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear teacher，
My name is Li Hua．I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some help．
                ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱類作文，話題是關(guān)于自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語時所遇見的困難向老師說明并求助．文章的要點基本上都給了出來，考生需要翻譯成英語．靈活變化表達，適度進行改寫．在寫作的時候使用高級的詞匯和各種句型，讓文章充滿變化．在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，盡量使用諺語來提高文章的檔次．What's more而且；
【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語：have difficulty in doing 做某事有困難；so that因此；In the meanwhile，與此同時；make great progress取得進步；with your help在你的幫助下；First，I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember．這個句子運用到that引導(dǎo)定語從句；Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for some help．這個句子faced 是非謂語動詞；

解答 Dear teacher，
     My name is Li Hua．I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some help．I have met many difficulties in learning English．First，I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember（高分句型）．Besides，the texts are too long for me to recite．What's more，grammar is also very difficult to learn．（高分句型）
     Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for some help．（高分句型）Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily？In the meanwhile，I advise you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you．（高分句型）Also，I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar．I'm sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help．I would be grateful to you if you can give me some good suggestions．（高分句型）Thank you!
Yours
LiHua

點評 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感．（1）認真審題，確定體裁． （2）構(gòu)思要點．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達的要點．設(shè)計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等，把要點串聯(lián)起來，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認真檢查，避免錯誤．仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．