分析 本篇書面表達考查提綱作文.要求根據(jù)提示信息談?wù)勗谌粘I钪形覀儜?yīng)該怎樣養(yǎng)成健康的生活方式,因為是發(fā)言稿,所以要求文字通俗易懂,貼近生活.
其次,因為提示信息較少,所以要適當發(fā)揮,補充足夠內(nèi)容.此外,在時態(tài)方面要注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱方面為第一人稱.
【相關(guān)語法點提示】
本篇書面表達可以在文章開頭說明健康生活方式的重要性"good health is so essential to our daily life and lays the foundation for our future development
";
然后在第二段用三個相似句式"we should…"具體闡明怎樣養(yǎng)成健康的生活方式"have a healthy diet、play sports regularly、take a positive attitude、
far away from computer";最后在第三段用緊扣主題的句子"I hope all of us can live healthily and happily"收尾.這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)布局不僅把要點全面展示出來
,而且使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,條理分明.
另外,注意多種句式的運用會使文章亮點紛呈,例如:賓語從句"I strongly advise that we should never sit too long in front of computers"、形式主語"because it is bad for our health"、結(jié)果狀語從句"so that we can keep mentally healthy"等等.另外,在寫作時還要注意連接詞的使用,比如However、Additionally、what's more、furthermore等,以使文章上下銜接自然,表述自然流暢.
解答 Dear fellow students,
As we all know,good health is so essential to our daily life and lays the foundation for our future development.(高分句型一)(點明主題)
However,in modem times,many people don't live a healthy lifestyle clue to different reasons.In my opinion,we should have a healthy diet and play
sports regularly to keep physically healthy.Besides,we should take a positive attitude towards people around us so that we can keep mentally healthy.(高分句型二)Furthermore,I strongly advise that we should never sit too long in front of computers because it is bad for our health.(高分句型三)(如何養(yǎng)成健康的生活方式)
I hope all of us can live healthily and happily.That's all.Thank you!(結(jié)尾)
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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