分析 這是一篇關(guān)于夢(mèng)想話題的作文.根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).內(nèi)容包括:一點(diǎn)明寫信的目的;二自己的人生夢(mèng)想;三如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想;四希望知道對(duì)方的夢(mèng)想.
高分句型:
1.Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory,which inspires me to recall my dream-to become a doctor,saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers.
句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,代指主句這件事;saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers.是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ).
我們的祖國(guó)夢(mèng)想是重現(xiàn)強(qiáng)國(guó)夢(mèng),這激勵(lì)著我實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想,我夢(mèng)想成為一個(gè)醫(yī)生,挽救生命,降低邊遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)村民醫(yī)療負(fù)擔(dān).
2.Therefore,giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously.句子里giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ);I am to face consciously是my first challenge 的定語(yǔ)從句.
因此,發(fā)揮強(qiáng)項(xiàng),減小弱項(xiàng),為高考做充足的準(zhǔn)備是我現(xiàn)在的首要的挑戰(zhàn).
解答 Dear Nancy,
I'm glad to hear from you.Now I am writing to share you my dream.(點(diǎn)明寫信的目的)
Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory,which inspires me to recall my dream-to become a doctor,saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers.【高分句型一】(自己的人生夢(mèng)想)
Being a motivation and goal,dreams make us determined,diligent and devoted as well as making life more meaningful.However,it is quite plain that obstacles cast a fierce eye on me alongside.Therefore,giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously.【高分句型二】Also,I am fully convinced that sparing no efforts to offer toil and sweat firmly and consistently will contributes a lot.(如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想)
I am in curiosity about yours and reply to me soon,please.(希望知道對(duì)方的夢(mèng)想)
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文.
本文采用了較高級(jí)的詞匯和句型,使文章亮點(diǎn)多多.但是對(duì)于普通水平的學(xué)生,在高考中不主張用自己不能熟練使用的句型或詞匯,用錯(cuò)不如不用.
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