Question

6．你的朋友王林剛轉學去了一所新學校，學校的各個學生社團（associations）正在納新．面對眾多的選擇，王林沒了主意，寫信向你求助．假如你是李越，你認為可以考慮參加籃球協(xié)會（the Basketball Association）或者英語俱樂部（the English Club）．請你用英語給王林寫一封100-120詞的信，推薦這兩個社團，并分別說明推薦理由．
注意：信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．
亮點句型一：I feel that it would be wise if you could join the Basketball Association since you love it so much．我覺著如果你能加入籃球協(xié)會是明智的，因為你非常喜歡它．本句中that引導的是賓語從句，在賓語從句中it是形式主語，真正的主語是if you could join the Basketball Association since you love it so much．
亮點句型二：Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work，it can also promote your friendship with your new companions．它不僅可以滿足你的興趣，讓你放松繁重的學業(yè)，它也可以促進你的友誼與你的新同伴．這是一個倒裝句，Not only至于句首句子做部分倒裝．

解答 Dear Wang Lin，
In your letter，you have asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your new school．Thanks for trusting me and I'll try to make some suggestions．
I feel that it would be wise if you could join the Basketball Association since you love it so much．（亮點句型一）Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work，it can also promote your friendship with your new companions．（亮點句型二）Besides，the English Club is also a wonderful choice．Apart from improving your English study，their activities are helpful in many aspects．For instance，your skills of communication will turn out to be better than before．By the way，maybe it is a good chance to make friends with English native speakers．
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．If you have any more problems，please contact me at any time．I'm willing to discuss with you whenever you need．
                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                    Li Yue

點評 考查開放性作文寫作，開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．