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3．假如你叫李越，是一名高中生．隨著私家車的增加，你所就讀的學(xué)校門口以及學(xué)校附近交通擁擠問題越來越嚴(yán)重．這給學(xué)生、教師、家長和路人帶來許多不便．交通堵塞也存在不可忽略的隱患．請你根據(jù)這種現(xiàn)象，給校長寫一封約100-120詞的信，反映上述情況，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ú⑻岢鲋辽賰牲c(diǎn)建議．可適當(dāng)展開．
注意：信的開頭與落款已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）．
Dear headmaster，
                                                                                   
Yours sincerely，
Li Yue．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
With so many parents coming to pick up their children，traffic jams are frequent near the school gate，causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by．
很多家長來接孩子，在學(xué)校大門附近交通堵塞頻繁，給我們的學(xué)生以及我們的教師和路人造成很多不便．
高分句型二：
First，we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or take a bus to school instead of taking cars，which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students'health as well．
首先，我們應(yīng)該鼓勵學(xué)生騎自行車或乘公共汽車來代替汽車的學(xué)校，這將不僅有助于減少堵塞，而且有利于學(xué)生的健康．

解答 Dear headmaster，
I'm Li Yue．I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate．
With so many parents coming to pick up their children，traffic jams are frequent near the school gate，causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by（高分句型一）．Many people have been worrying about the hidden traffic problems．So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken．First，we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or take a bus to school instead of taking cars，which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students'health as well（高分句型二）．It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others．Besides，cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate．
I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon．
                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                               Li Yue

點(diǎn)評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．