Question

【題目】假定你叫李華，你在紐約時(shí)，寄宿在Mr.and Mrs.Green家里，回國(guó)后想寫(xiě)封感謝信，感謝Mr.and Mrs.Green熱情友善地提供住宿、飲食并和你練習(xí)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)，同時(shí)想邀請(qǐng)他們到中國(guó)來(lái)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. and Mrs.Green!

I am writing to thank you for your warmth,which I enjoyed when I stayed together with you in New York.

It was very kind of you to offer me a comfortable and clean room in your house when I was in New York.I like the delicious food cooked by Mrs.Green,which made my journey more unforgettable.Hopefully,I can have the chance to taste it in the future.In addition,I really appreciated your practicing oral English with me and I have made great progress in my spoken English.The stay in New York has greatly enriched my experience and widely broadened my mind.

I really hope you can come to China for a visit

when it is convenient for you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：試題為應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信寫(xiě)作，試題只給出寫(xiě)作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫(xiě)作細(xì)節(jié)，為半開(kāi)放性寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫(xiě)信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫(xiě)好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點(diǎn)寫(xiě)的是感謝Mr.and Mrs.Green熱情友善地提供住宿、飲食并和你練習(xí)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)，同時(shí)想邀請(qǐng)他們到中國(guó)來(lái)。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過(guò)渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一篇書(shū)信，格式正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，句子銜接緊密，文章布局合理，同時(shí)使用高級(jí)詞匯和句子。I am writing to thank you for your warmth,which I enjoyed when I stayed together with you in New York.which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；It was very kind of you to offer me a comfortable and clean room in your house when I was in New York.when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；I really hope you can come to China for a visit when it is convenient for you.賓語(yǔ)從句和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；另外，Hopefully, In addition,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。