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(2010·江蘇四星級(jí)高中高三調(diào)研考試)
當(dāng)前我國(guó)政府和人民正努力把我國(guó)建設(shè)成一個(gè)社會(huì)關(guān)系和諧的國(guó)家。我們高三學(xué)生與家庭成員以及班級(jí)同學(xué)的關(guān)系處理總體上是好的，但也存在著一些問(wèn)題，如容易發(fā)怒，與同學(xué)吵架，不聽(tīng)從家長(zhǎng)和老師的教育等。
假如我校外教Andrew正在調(diào)查我們高三學(xué)生與家庭成員和班級(jí)同學(xué)、老師之間的關(guān)系處理情況。作為高三學(xué)生，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你把以上的情況向Andrew反映并提出一些關(guān)于如何改進(jìn)關(guān)系的意見(jiàn)。
要點(diǎn)：1、目前的實(shí)際情況：好的方面和不好的方面；
2、你個(gè)人的改進(jìn)意見(jiàn)（至少兩條）。
注意：1、文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），你只需接著寫(xiě)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2、詞數(shù)：150左右。
Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. __________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

One possible version:
Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers is good. However, there exist some problems. Some students in our grade easily lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden. What’s worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.
In my opinion, we middle school students should make effort to improve the situation. First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Second, when we are not feeling good or happy, we can chat with our friends or teachers or even parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. Third, after a day’s hard work we can re lax by exercising, such as playing basketball table tennis and so on.

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