Question

16．手機給我們帶來很多便利的同時也帶來了越來越多的"低頭族"，請你描述這種現(xiàn)象及其危害；并發(fā)表你的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右．
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．低頭族phubbers，低頭族現(xiàn)象phubbing．
Mobile phones bring us much convenience and has become part of our life．However，more and more phubbers，especially young people，would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere，whethe r they are riding on a bus，eating at dinner tables or walking across the street．They never care about what happens around．
As far as I am concerned，the habit of phubbing has many disadvantages．First，it does harm to people's health，especially their eyes．Besides，phubbing is also dangerous while people are crossing the street．What's more，in some occasions，such as at dinner table，phubbing seems impolite to others．
In a word，people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
However，more and more phubbers，especially young people，would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere，whethe r they are riding on a bus，eating at dinner tables or walking across the street
然而，越來越多的人，尤其是年輕人，要盯住屏幕隨時隨地的，不管他們是乘公共汽車，吃在餐桌上或走在街上．
高分句型二：
In a word，people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing．
總之，人們應該利用好手機而不是沉迷于手機．

解答 Mobile phones bring us much convenience and has become part of our life．However，more and more phubbers，especially young people，would like to stare at their screen anytime and anywhere，whethe r they are riding on a bus，eating at dinner tables or walking across the street（高分句型一）．They never care about what happens around．
As far as I am concerned，the habit of phubbing has many disadvantages．First，it does harm to people's health，especially their eyes．Besides，phubbing is also dangerous while people are crossing the street．What's more，in some occasions，such as at dinner table，phubbing seems impolite to others．
In a word，people should make good use of mobile phones instead of becoming addicted to phubbing（高分句型二）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．