Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之問(wèn)交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(^), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。（請(qǐng)將答案寫(xiě)在答題紙上）

As far as I can remember, grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad ones. We rented a home near a lake where I spent good time of my life. I attended to school to learn a variety of course, and went camping overnight in the woods. My dog and I would go fishing in the lake that I mentioned early. During the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on the lake. In Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that tall at the time. It was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changed. This was a tough change for me because the area total differed from Ohio. There was no rivers or lakes to fish in at all.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】grow—growing 動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)，故把grow—growing。

【2】good前加a 句意：度過(guò)我一生中的一段美好時(shí)光。故在good前加a。

【3】把a(bǔ)ttended后面的to去掉或把a(bǔ)ttended改為went 固定搭配attend school/go to school去上學(xué)，故把a(bǔ)ttended后面的to去掉或把a(bǔ)ttended改為went。

【4】course—courses 句意：各種各樣的課程，故把course—courses。

【5】early—earlier 句意：我更早提到的，所以用比較級(jí)，故把early—earlier。

【6】will—would 文章在回憶過(guò)去美好的時(shí)光，所以要用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把will—would 。

【7】heavily—heavy be動(dòng)詞后面用形容詞作表語(yǔ)，故把heavily—heavy。

【8】when—that 此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，故把when—that。

【9】total—totally 副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，此處應(yīng)用副詞故把total—totally。

【10】was—were 這是一個(gè)there be句型，句子的主語(yǔ)是復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把was—were。