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4．生活中沖突時有發(fā)生．假設你班同學蘇華和李江打籃球時發(fā)生爭執(zhí)，導致關系緊張．請
你結合此事，并根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，向學校英文報"Happy Teens冶專欄投稿．

簡要描述事情的經過	打籃球、碰撞、爭執(zhí)，等等
分析發(fā)生沖突的原因	1．遇事不夠冷靜2．…
談談避免沖突的做法	（請考生根據(jù)自己的經歷或感想，提出至少兩種做法）

注意：
1．對所有要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)150 左右．開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇表格類的提綱作文，要求以沖突為話題，描述給定情境，分析現(xiàn)象并提出建議．話題貼近時代，貼近生活，貼近學生，提示內容少，發(fā)揮空間大，考生有話可寫．寫作時應用第三人稱和第一人稱．時態(tài)以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主．重要短語：bump into sb（與…..相撞…．），turned into（變成），It is one's fault（是某人的錯…．），be to blame（應受…..責備），cared about（關心，擔心），essential（必要的），harmonious（和諧的），put ourselves in others'place．（站在別人的角度），handle conflicts（處理沖突）．

解答 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life．During the basketball game yesterday afternoon，Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other，trying to catch the ball．【高分句型】Then they started shouting and yelling，and it turned into a horrible quarrel．（描述事情經過）
  To be honest，it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame-they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things．They cared too much about winning and losing．As a matter of fact，blocking，pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game．（分析沖突原因）
To avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another，which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life．【高分句型】It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society．Instead of blaming each other，we should communicate more and put ourselves in others'place．（避免沖突做法）
     Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate．We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．