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注意：
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Our school will set a voluntary service club on April 22nd．The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others．
The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city，keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on．The students which are healthy，patience，warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club．Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it，please sent your application to the Students'Union before March 15th．The office of the Students'Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days．
March 8th
The Students'Union．

分析 本文主要講述我們學(xué)校將建立一個(gè)志愿服務(wù)俱樂部．它的主要目的是號(hào)召和組織學(xué)生更好地為社會(huì)服務(wù)，發(fā)展合作能力．歡迎健康，耐心，熱心，樂于助人的學(xué)生加入俱樂部．如果想?yún)⒓�，請�(jiān)?月15日之前把申請發(fā)送到學(xué)生會(huì)．

解答 Our school will set∧a voluntary service club on April 22nd．The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others．
The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city，keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on．The students which are healthy，patience，warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club．Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it，please sent your application to the Students'Union before March 15th．The office of the Students'Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days．
March 8th
The Students'Union．
詳解：
1．加 up 考查固定短語．set up 表示"建立"．     
2．去 for 考查動(dòng)詞．serve是及物動(dòng)詞，可直接接名詞或代詞作賓語，不用介詞，serve  society意為"服務(wù)于社會(huì)"．       
3．to改為with 考查介詞．cooperate with  sb．表示"和某人合作"．    
4．guidances改為guidance 考查名詞．guidance表示"指導(dǎo)"，是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)．
 5．which 改為 who 分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞students指人，用關(guān)系代詞who．   
6．patience改為patient 考查形容詞．a(chǎn)nd是并列連詞，它前后連接兩個(gè)相同的語法成分，根據(jù)前后healthy，warm-hearted and willing都是形容詞，patience是名詞，其形容詞是patient．
7．Whether改為If  考查連詞．whether 表示"是否，無論"； if表示"如果，是否"．根據(jù)句義是"如果你感興趣，想要成為其中的一員，請于3月15日前把申請送到學(xué)生會(huì)"，所以Whether 改 If．
8．sent改為send 考查謂語動(dòng)詞．祈使句用動(dòng)詞原形開頭，要用send．
 9．choosing改為chosen 考查過去分詞．修飾candidates用 chosen表示被選中的參賽者． 
10．a(chǎn)改為an 考查冠詞．interview讀音以發(fā)元音開頭，所以用an．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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