Question

20．假定你是李華，你的外籍同學Jim時常為中文寫作而發(fā)愁并發(fā)來郵件向你求助．請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示安慰和鼓勵；
2．提供幾條提高中文寫作能力的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．
I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．I can understand how you feel about it．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．However，there is no need to worry．If you make a determined effort，you will surely improve it．
First of all，read as many Chinese articles as possible．The more you read，the more inspirations you willget．Meanwhile，you will gradually get a good knowledge of the Chinese language．Secondly，form a habit ofcollecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．Finally，practise writing in Chinese often．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．
Hope you can make great progress in your Chinese writing．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是李華寫給外籍同學Jim的一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表示安慰和鼓勵；二提供幾條提高中文寫作能力的建議；三表達希望．高分句型：1．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．句子里As引導非限制性定語從句，表示"正如"； plays an important part表示"起到重要的作用"；as well表示"也"．正如我們所知，漢語的寫作能力在學校和生活中起到重要的作用．2．Secondly，form a habit of collecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．句子里，主句是一個祈使句，以動詞原形form開頭；which 引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句里的beautiful Chinese sentences．第二，養(yǎng)成收集和背誦優(yōu)美漢語語句的習慣，你可以在在寫作里運用它們．

解答 Dear Jim，
     I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．I can understand how you feel about it．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．【高分句型一】However，there is no need to worry．If you make a determined effort，you will surely improve it．（表示安慰和鼓勵）
    First of all，read as many Chinese articles as possible．The more you read，the more inspirations you will get．Meanwhile，you will gradually get a good knowledge of the Chinese language．Secondly，form a habit of collecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．【高分句型二】Finally，practise writing in Chinese often．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．（提供幾條提高中文寫作能力的建議）
   Hope you can make great progress in your Chinese writing．（表達希望）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．書面表達不僅反映在表達內(nèi)容上，也反映在書面形式上．一定要注意單詞拼寫正確，書寫規(guī)范，字跡工整，卷面力求整潔，正確使用標點符號，使別人看起來耳目一新，具有整體美感，從而提高自己的得分檔